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On those long and cold lonely nights
I would wonder to myself how goes my inner candle's light
For I've had tears of doubt and sadness
And sand of angerand resentment poured upon it
Yet my little candle, oh my little candle, would still burn so bright and strong
where I've kept it deep inside and locked up all along
Andon one day my little flame grew
And my body it started to consume
It burst forth from within me an dfilled me so completely
Ever since then my life's been going smoothly
But everynow and then I'm afraid that my tears and sand will harm it
So I go to lock it up and keep it safe
And my big bright candle will burn brighter with a tingle
To tell me no to lock it up tight
Because he warms other people, not just me
On those long and cold lonely nights
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| Carol |
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Reply with quote | #3 |
What a wonderful poem. Please keep writing. You are very insightful and a beautiful child of God. Love from Carol Ann |
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| Alba |
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You have great talents. Keep it up. Even though I'm much older than you, your poem touched me and I could definitely identify with it. Love, Alba |
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Great job Dorian!. I don't know if I'd have guts to put myself out there like this. I might try some haiku because it is shorter by nature.
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| maria |
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hi dorian, that is a really good poem! i am so proud of you. love titi maria |
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Reply with quote | #8 |
Dorian, this is a beautiful poem. What a lovely gift He has given you. Praise God!!
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| Jim |
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Dorian, I imagine you've got a flame - and a boatload of talent and creativity. There is no limit when you receive and use Holy Spirit gifts. Shine on! |
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